My Poem

A little lie By Maddi

But I have to give some creds to @nettym

No one gets that one little lie hurts
They can look you in the eyes, seems like a hypnotize
It's hurts like when a car tumbles and crashes
The way all the lies just flashes
The words cut in your skin
It will never be the same
when one lie changes everything
It's all just becomes changeless..

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My Poem

A little lie By Maddi

But I have to give some creds to @nettym

No one gets that one little lie hurts
They can look you in the eyes, seems like a hypnotize
It's hurts like when a car tumbles and crashes
The way all the lies just flashes
The words cut in your skin
It will never be the same
when one lie changes everything
It's all just becomes changeless..

new2luv · Answer

good job

iiMaddii · Answer

Thank you.

@new2luv wrote:

good job

Ty

vybez · Answer

awe this is really good. lies hurt i really agree with this poem-

nettym · Answer

you did good :) always glad to help.

iiMaddii · Answer

Thank you!, Also thank you for fixing my poem a bit .

iiMaddii · Answer

@vybez wrote:

awe this is really good. lies hurt i really agree with this poem-

Yeah, Thank you

PapiBella · Answer

awe thats really good, I really like how it's kinda sad. But are you hurting so that's why it was a bit sad?

PapiBella · Answer

@vybez wrote:

awe this is really good. lies hurt I really agree with this poem-

Possible yeah they do hurt like a lot

iiMaddii · Answer

@papibella wrote:

awe thats really good, I really like how it's kinda sad. But are you hurting so that's why it was a bit sad?

Well yeah, It was mainly about lies and about how a very little lie can really hurt someone.Like a little lie can be life changing and I don't think people get it.

PapiBella · Answer

@iimaddii wrote:

@papibella wrote:

awe thats really good, I really like how it's kinda sad. But are you hurting so that's why it was a bit sad?

Well yeah, It was mainly about lies and about how a very little lie can really hurt someone. Like a little lie can be life-changing and I don't think people get it.

do you want to talk about it in my dms?

iiMaddii · Answer

No thank you. But we can be friends?

PapiBella · Answer

Ok :)
I would like that :)

Rival · Answer

Great Job!

iiMaddii · Answer

@rival wrote:

Great Job!

Ty!

bivibes · Answer

nice job maddie!!!!!!!

iiMaddii · Answer

@bivibes wrote:

nice job maddie!!!!!!!

It's "Maddi" Bud you've known me all your life and you can't spell your sisters name? smh

bivibes · Answer

Lmao

PapiBella · Answer

LOOL fvhzdbz