I posted the wrong part. Here is the title : Who or What am I?

. I walked up 6 packs of stairs. I looked around the hallway, I finally saw my homeroom. I got to the door and saw kids like me. They all had their own style and personality. No Cliques. No Judgement. When I walked in, They gave me a real smile and said Hi. I say down in the middle row and waited for the teacher. I can't even make this up when I say that this teacher cartwheeled into the classroom! We all clapped and the teacher bowed. She said, "Hello Class! I am Mrs. Fizz or you call me Mrs.Z ! This lesson is about....FRIENDSHIP and ACCEPTANCE! I am going to pair you guys in to groups of 3 and y'all will talk about your interest." She pulled out a list from her pocket dress then she started to call out names. "Okay. I want Kelly, Jordan, and Lin over there. Jasmine, Opal, and Ilona over there. Jack, Hana, George and Pansy over there. Lastly, I want Freiia, Jac, Jax, and Raven over there." She pointed to everyone's placements, and mine was in the smack dab middle of the rainbow decorated classroom. I moved towards the middle to see two emo-ish boys and a softie barbie girl. I just looked down and played with my long flowing curls. Then one of the boys said, Hey I'm Jac and that is my twin Jax. That is Freiia or Frei." I looked over to Jax and I'm not gonna lie, there was something special about him and it made a spark go off inside of me. I looked over to Freiia and she smiled at me. That smile could brighten up a room. We started talking about our interests, turns out we have so much in common! We all love manga, reading, writing, video games, and just being ourselves. We checked our schedules and turns out we have 7 classes together out of 9! That is lovely. The bell rang and we grabbed our stuff and headed towards our lockers.

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I posted the wrong part. Here is the title : Who or What am I?

. I walked up 6 packs of stairs. I looked around the hallway, I finally saw my homeroom. I got to the door and saw kids like me. They all had their own style and personality. No Cliques. No Judgement. When I walked in, They gave me a real smile and said Hi.  I say down in the middle row and waited for the teacher. I can't even make this up when I say that this teacher cartwheeled into the classroom! We all clapped and the teacher bowed. She said, "Hello Class! I am Mrs. Fizz or you call me Mrs.Z ! This lesson is about....FRIENDSHIP and ACCEPTANCE! I am going to pair you guys in to groups of 3 and y'all will talk about your interest." She pulled out a list from her pocket dress then she started to call out names. "Okay. I want Kelly, Jordan, and Lin over there.  Jasmine, Opal, and Ilona over there. Jack, Hana, George and Pansy over there. Lastly, I want Freiia, Jac, Jax, and Raven over there." She pointed to everyone's placements, and mine was in the smack dab middle of the rainbow decorated classroom. I moved towards the middle to see two emo-ish boys and a softie barbie girl. I just looked down and played with my long flowing curls. Then one of the boys said, Hey I'm Jac and that is my twin Jax. That is Freiia or Frei." I looked over to Jax and I'm not gonna lie, there was something special about him and it made a spark go off inside of me. I looked over to Freiia and she smiled at me. That smile could brighten up a room. We started talking about our interests, turns  out we have so much in common! We all love manga, reading, writing, video games, and just being ourselves.  We checked our schedules and turns out we have 7 classes together out of 9! That is lovely. The bell rang and we grabbed our stuff and headed towards our lockers.

RaeRae · Answer

This is my original piece that I am still writing of my life with some of my friends.

snowflake0531 · Answer

The whole short story seems more like a summary than a story
I think that you should add more details and description?

RaeRae · Answer

I'm adding parts cause there is a stupid word limit T~T

snowflake0531 · Answer

oh

RaeRae · Answer

Thank you :3

RaeRae · Answer

It's for a project-