Slumpedk:
Like my poem?
Slumpedk:
There are only 3 types of people mean, kind, sad. They were ok when the world was just started but now there nothing you could do the help the sad in any way. If I could help them I would give them my heart in any type of way. If they refuse just go on your way there no point to be said it the world just stay the same for every way.
TyDaGreatest:
meh I mean It could be better
neveahisthebest:
i like your poem
nightshade0773:
that is a beautiful poem
neveahisthebest:
but yea what they said it could be better
Slumpedk:
neveahisthebest:
iok but yea its good
nettym:
It seems more of a statement or description when I read this. maybe provide more poetic phrases, and word choices a bit.
Slumpedk:
bet
nettym:
If you need any help or feedback, feel free to dm me, I help multiple people with things like this.
Slumpedk:
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iiMaddii:
alwayscutegang:
dets gud
Rival:
It looks good so far.
kaleighh533:
I think the poem is good, just maybe add more yk
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