Question

Freedom
by jhonyy9 as. A.J. Gábor
13.july .2000
... where do you go, tell me where to find
The many people who shout after you?
They have been researching for many, many years,
Not thinking about giving consolation to others!
Consolation what you expect from a person's partner,
Receiving a promise, he waits patiently for it,
But disappointment, if you follow it all,
It not only bitter the heart, but also the soul!
Having experienced all this for many, many years,
He finds out what's missing, then yells,
"Bird of Freedom" finally find me !!!
That I never need help again.
Because a loving heart is such a rarity today,
And man often waits in vain for Love,
For man is corrupted, and nature is with him,
Where is love from his heart? vanished!
How many beautiful things can you expect tomorrow,
If one receives love rather than sin,
But all this is waiting for you for a long time,
Until then, we will build many many sand castles in our dreams.
But the day will come when the sky will be clear,
Out of the darkness, every man enters the sun,
It will be spring and singing will fly over the cities,
Echoes of mountains valleys rivers seas.
Because we've ruined so much in life already,
Many migratory birds fly so far from us,
And with them happily flies the bird of freedom,
The man's cry will be answered one day.
How then will it be too late? maybe not, who knows?
Until then, a lot of man's sighs will go to heaven,
Tempted by the many Sins and Evils,
We are always waiting for our "release" from Tomorrow.
We'll get it once! now we live with it,
Wrapped in our dreams, we hope in this,
That tomorrow may be the Truth,
And Eternal Freedom moves into our hearts!

Answer 1

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Answer 14

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