Question

A song I wrote, opinions please!



They tell you believe in yourself, but sometime you can even tell, who you are on the inside, sometimes tou just wanna cry
They say people can change, but ill just spare me the pain, your not who you say you are, so dont stretch the truth so far. Sometimes it hard to keep my cool, when i seem them believing that your not a fool, but you are, oh oh oh oh, you are.

Ive seen the real you, i mustve been a fool to believe in you, in you. Im sure you say youve changed, but people dont change, they stay the same. No, they always stay the same, people dont change.

You think you know someone. You think theyll hold you when, times are tough, you think theyll tell you that your always enough. But i was oblivious, i should have seen the warning signs, that this was all a big lie.

Ive seen the real you, i mustve been a fool to believe in you, in you. Im sure you say youve changed, but people dont change, they always stay the same. No, they always stay the same, people dont change.


No im not saying, dont trust people. Im just saying, be careful who surrounds you. Because people can hurt you. No dont give up faith, all is not lost yet, but just know your strengths, and dont let them walk on you.

Ive seen the real you, i mustve been a fool to believe in you, in you. Im sure you say youve changed, but people dont change, they always stay the same. No, they always stay the same, people dont change.

Answer 1

Its great in my opinion & you are really talented to come up with this!

Answer 2

I love it

Answer 3

:D

Answer 4

:D you should continue on in your quest of songwriting, you'll go far

Answer 5

thank yo guys so much, that means so much to me

Answer 6

You're welcome, xd I would give medal but mobile has no best response.

Answer 7

Great job!

Answer 8

It's rlly nice

Answer 9

It´s okay.

Answer 10

Just a little bit of grammar adjustment´s

Answer 11

And it´ll be better.