Question

Started on this new song im not finished with it yet lol

where you been yea idk
out here chasing these other hoes
said you was leaving for the summer tho
but ion wanna let go you
feel like you finna let me go
please baby dont ever let me go
i really want, you really need you now

https://youtu.be/_eBLMbEiGuM

^thats the beat^

Answer 1

Its good but i think ur trying too hard to make it rhyme so its sounds weird yk

Answer 2

Np cuh keep it up

Answer 3

its good i dont really see sum wrong with and i like it keep working on it

Answer 4

lmao this is nice

Answer 5

its its its its its a nice start

Answer 6

i actually really love the beat

Answer 7

bruv that beat is sick and i might actually modify that beat a little
but that beat with the lyrics are perfect

Answer 8

sounds dope, the only thing i would recommend is changing up the rhyme pattern. the pattern you have is AAAAA when usually in songs there will be a mix like ABABAB or AABBAABB its just good to add variety in the rhyming pattern but you dont have to of course, its your song so be creative and do what you want :)

Answer 9

My favorite line is prolly "out here chasing these other hoes"💀💀jp tho its actually really good if you happen to finish the song definitely post it🤞🏼🙃

Answer 10

Np lol and is this song based on real life problems? Bc if so his momma didn't raise him right smh🤦🏼‍♀️😭

Answer 11

i love that beat

Answer 12

Same lol

Answer 13

the beat is nice but maybe a little less rhyme

Answer 14

Niceeeeeeeee