Happiness startin to fade. when i was little I thought everyone should have a happy life all made. life is full of suspense throw your happiness over the fence cause it ain't comin back no time soon wait.... wait. Things gettin worse people dyin left and right not a sign of hope left in sight still I see them faces in my bedroom at night tryna wipe them memories away. Yet only thing come to my mine is the constant torture all day will i make it through another day I dont know but at this point time seems to be movin too slow....

its not done.. wrote this based off the thoughts runnin through my mind no one would eva know if i neva spoke these thought's aloud

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Happiness startin to fade. when i was little I thought everyone should have a happy life all made. life is full of suspense throw your happiness over the fence cause it ain't comin back no time soon wait.... wait. Things gettin worse people dyin left and right not a sign of hope left in sight still I see them faces in my bedroom at night tryna wipe them memories away. Yet only thing come to my mine is the constant torture all day will i make it through another day I dont know but at this point time seems to be movin too slow....

its not done.. wrote this based off the thoughts runnin through my mind no one would eva know if i neva spoke these thought's aloud

JayJay16 · Answer

ik the grammar and punctuation is off i'll fix it but just read it tell me what you think ig

itsmehjay · Answer

Wow this hits deep I love it twin. Keep up the work~! 🥺

JayJay16 · Answer

Thank you twin its based off sum things that have actually happend if u understand
 it you will know exactly what happend

itsmehjay · Answer

Well, no not really I'm not sure what happened but hopefully everything goes alright! ❤

ilightnight64 · Answer

its very good and deep i like it and keep working on it (^-^)\b

BrokenMoon · Answer

WOw ur rlly good dude, i love it. Keep it up

JayJay16 · Answer

@ilightnight64 wrote:

its very good and deep i like it and keep working on it (^-^)\b

Thank you, and I will

JayJay16 · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

WOw ur rlly good dude, i love it. Keep it up

thank youuu

ilightnight64 · Answer

np :D

Astrid1 · Answer

I likey (>^uwu^>)

JayJay16 · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

I likey (>^uwu^>)

Thank you very much

CKB · Answer

I really like it.  Its very deep.  I can almost see it as a poem.

JayJay16 · Answer

@ckb wrote:

I really like it. Its very deep. I can almost see it as a poem.

Oh thank you it's based off real life events from my life

CKB · Answer

I'm very sorry, I hope you start to feel better

JayJay16 · Answer

@ckb wrote:

I'm very sorry, I hope you start to feel better

Oh, thank you so much.