Question

Guys I need your opinion. I wrote a song and wanna know what you think. Its called One and Only.

Verse 1:
I've spent all of my life
Searching for a part of myself
That would make me feel better
Than I do right now
But nothing seems right
Constantly looking over my shoulder
I just want this to be over
But it'll never go away
Can you help me?
This pain is overwhelming
I'm trying but I can't breathe
Stay with me now
Chous:
Please don't go
I don't wanna be alone
Tonight just hold me close
And i just might be okay
Lying here in your arms
Home
Yeah, I finally feel at home
No more building walls
Cuz I know I'm safe with you
Doubts
All my doubts are gone
I know you're someone I can depend on
Saying goodbye to being afraid
To the heartache and pain
That was then
This is now
You're my one and only
Mhmm
Verse 2:
I could try and picture
My life without you in it
But it wouldn't be the same (No)
Cuz when you walked in
You changed my life
Made me realize
I deserved better
And I haven't been the same since
I just keep falling
Over and over and over again
(Repeat chorus)
If i could go make in time
And relive any moment of my life
It would be right here right now
You by my side
(repeat chorus)

Answer 1

Comments and questions below this text! Ty

Answer 2

oooo i love it

Answer 3

Tyyyy i wrote thatt
for a special someone in my life

Answer 4

awwww

Answer 5

this is great! i love it

Answer 6

noice

Answer 7

nice song . keep going

Answer 8

i like it keep going

Answer 9

Reminds me of Edward Maya this is my life.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZG89GH6ERGc

Answer 10

Good job btw :)

Answer 11

Tyyy

Answer 12

ywww

Answer 13

np