Question

Hi I need help on biology assignment

Answer 1

in which grade are you?

Answer 2

ok so what do u need help specfically on 💀💀

Answer 3

cause there a lot links and words on there 💀💀

Answer 4

am in 11

Answer 5

i think i need to finds an article related to diversity of living things because that is the topic, that I wanna choose

Answer 6

@smokeybrown hi am done i just want you to check if it is good

Answer 7

and this is the link of the article
https://www.scientificamerican.com/article/how-biodiversity-keeps-earth-alive/

Answer 8

It seems like a pretty solid explanation of the concept of biodiversity. It seems like you even used some of the keywords from you unit, which is pretty nice. I don't see any direct references to the article you linked; it might be a good idea to include some quotes or references.
As long as you made sure to follow the guidelines and check off the requirements of the assignment, I think your information and presentation is looking good!

Answer 9

ok i will try it , thanks

Answer 10

It looks pretty good. I notice you included some direct quotes from the article, which could help to support your arguments.
Make sure to take care of the grammar issues, including punctuation and run-on sentences. For the point you're trying to convey, I think the writing is decent!

Answer 11

thanks but will my teacher like it, if u are my teacher what mark would you give me

Answer 12

Based on the rubric in your first attachment, I think you could get 2/2 points for the article, 6/6 points for connecting it to your class unit, and 2 or 3/4 for the quality of the writing. So, probably 10 or 11/12, if I was grading it

Answer 13

oh k thanks

Answer 14

No problem :)