Question

Old poem-
What's in my head?
This noise that is deafening
But yet makes no sound at all
Why does it yearn for me to die?

What is this feeling?
That rakes at my skin
And makes my heart feel desolate
That holds the blade to my vein?

All these people around me
And i feel so alone
Stuck in a miserable home
And i feel so alone
No one to turn to for the pain
Because i'm alone

What is that feeling?
That sense that makes everything right?
Where is that person?
That fills the void in my chest
That breaks the silence in my head
That heals the cuts on my skin
Will my wish ever come true?

When will I stop feeling so depressed?
When I'm on the floor?
Bled like some pig?
No one to witness my death
Because i'm alone

Answer 1

I like it even tho it's sad o:

Answer 2

its good