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Answer 1

Justin walked into the empty cemetery and said he would stay there for twenty-four hours. Little did he know the cemetery wouldn’t be empty for long. Justin set up his camera and his tent, He was excited, because he never, would have thought, he would have done anything like this, he heard stories, that the cemetery was haunted. He remembered what his friend Jeremy told him about why he shouldn’t go to the cemetery Justin told Jeremy “It’s ok, I’ll be fine, besides, I’ll be livestreaming the whole thing”. Still worried Jeremy felt a little comfort knowing, he could still keep an eye on Justin. Trying to forget what Jeremy told him about the cemetery. Justin heard a noise, he yelled “Is someone out there”, then he heard a horrible sound, right then Justin, grabbed a stick, out of the corner of his eye, Justin seen something run out of the cemetery

Answer 2

still needs work

Answer 3

The grammar is a bit spotty in places, which can be a little distracting. That should be easy to fix though.
I am interested to know what happens next, so I hope you'll keep at it!

Answer 4

i think tht is pretty good smokey is right bout the grammar u gotta fix sum things yeah prety cool i would like to know wht after all tht