Hey guys! My first time posting a song on here and I wanted to know what you think so far.

I had a lot of loves In my life
but I had never felt so loved by you
we talked for a while and introduced
Then of course I had to leave
I promised that I'll be back

came back you were gone
I had never felt so empty
I would never find my love for someone again

Question

Hey guys! My first time posting a song on here and I wanted to know what you think so far.

I had a lot of loves In my life
but I had never felt so loved by you
we talked for a while and introduced
Then of course I had to leave
I promised that I'll be back

came back you were gone
I had never felt so empty
I would never find my love for someone again

1babygirl · Answer

it's good if you need help let me know

foxy44 · Answer

@1babygirl wrote:

it's good if you need help let me know

Okay, I sure will! :)

koenko · Answer

good job i think this song would go viral if u sang it on tik tok

foxy44 · Answer

LOL! Thanks!

koenko · Answer

np ^^

Astro · Answer

I think it is really good, I think you should change the first line to "I've had a lot of love in my life". It just makes t sound a little better but other than that pretty good.

foxy44 · Answer

@astro wrote:

I think it is really good, I think you should change the first line to "I've had a lot of love in my life". It just makes t sound a little better but other than that pretty good.

ooooo thanks i'll do that!

UhhhKhakis · Answer

Gives me a little sadness, but it's Awesome! :>

foxy44 · Answer

Thanks! ^

Astro · Answer

@foxy44 wrote:

@astro wrote:

I think it is really good, I think you should change the first line to "I've had a lot of love in my life". It just makes t sound a little better but other than that pretty good.

ooooo thanks i'll do that!

Great (:

hunterisgood · Answer

Nice bro!

foxy44 · Answer

Thanks! ^

xWFLif3x · Answer

its really good..you should make a song about school bet that'll make me laugh lol.

foxy44 · Answer

@xwflif3x wrote:

its really good..you should make a song about school bet that'll make me laugh lol.

LOL!!!

bridgetmadle5 · Answer

perioddd this is fire

foxy44 · Answer

@bridgetmadle5 wrote:

perioddd this is fire

umm.....Thanks!

foxy44 · Answer

@bridgetmadle5 wrote:

perioddd this is fire

my song is fire?

bridgetmadle5 · Answer

@foxy44 wrote:

@bridgetmadle5 wrote:

perioddd this is fire

my song is fire?

yes

foxy44 · Answer

SWEETCHESS!!!!!

itsmeka · Answer

Great job! Its Amazing!

foxy44 · Answer

Thank you guys so much for supporting me and encouraging me!

hunterisgood · Answer

NP!

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

Np

itsmeka · Answer

Of course!

kaleighh533 · Answer

I think its really good it kinda gives me sad but loving vibes yk but keep the good work up of course try your best and im sure you will progress a lot i look forward to hearing more from you (:

bridgetmadle5 · Answer

really good