Can I get some feedback on a short poem/song I made?

I never really focus
Cause sometimes your all I see
Even though your taller than me
Your never mean
A little Angel
that has a smile, it makes me happy
I've always really liked your style
we've only known each other for a little while
Im not even sure you remember my name
but I really would like it
If you felt the same

Question

Can I get some feedback on a short poem/song I made?

I never really focus
Cause sometimes your all I see
Even though your taller than me
Your never mean
A little Angel
that has a smile, it makes me happy
I've always really liked your style
we've only known each other for a little while
Im not even sure you remember my name
but I really would like it
If you felt the same

Shuki · Answer

@uhhhkhakis @rylee88 @scorpion13 @pandasenpai @nightshade0773 @25purvisj @keithmcclain

Rylee88 · Answer

That's really nice, it rhymes too!

Shuki · Answer

Thats why I said poem/song. You think its to cringy?

Rylee88 · Answer

No, I think its good. But mabey add a bit more to ¨Your never mean, your a little angle¨

Shuki · Answer

that could work, thank youu

Rylee88 · Answer

Np

Shuki · Answer

Im making it so it could be a little confession note

Rylee88 · Answer

lool

UhhhKhakis · Answer

I bet this is about me.

UhhhKhakis · Answer

But it's awesome!
Really love it!

nightshade0773 · Answer

BEAUTIFUL

Rylee88 · Answer

@uhhhkhakis It doesn't mean it's about YOU, I have never heard ANYONE liking you sooooooo... *Yikes*

UhhhKhakis · Answer

@rylee88 wrote:

@uhhhkhakis It doesn't mean it's about YOU, I have never heard ANYONE liking you sooooooo... *Yikes*

Lmaooo that's funny.

jemayacorley234 · Answer

its is good but i think it will be more better if u make more because u is pretty good

Shuki · Answer

I'll try, but it'll turn a little depressing

Rylee88 · Answer

@UhhhKhakis IKR! xD

Scorpion13 · Answer

Ye tht is good

brokenbaexd · Answer

@shuki that is good

Icyhot · Answer

@Shuki  It's heartwarming! I love your writing!

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

wow thats amazing
@shuki

keithMcClain · Answer

@shuki wrote:

@uhhhkhakis @rylee88 @scorpion13 @pandasenpai @nightshade0773 @25purvisj @keithmcclain

I really miss talking with you! ever since I went on the trip and had lots of school to do I wasn't able to talk with you. your poem is really beautiful I hope we can talk again real soon!))

Rylee88 · Answer

Me too <3