Question

I wrote this Poem about a Broken Heart, so I was wondering if it's okay. Can you give me feedback please? And maybe a possible name?

The sun rises, Just as it sets
Time comes, Just as it goes
It's the same with everything
Even if I wish it wasn't
So it's only logical that
Love comes, Just as it goes
You can fall in love
And you can fall out of it
You can be a person's everything
And then you can destroy their heart
Be careful with your actions, Your words
A heart is fragile, And once it's broken
It'll never heal properly again
Even though some of us are born with our hearts broken
It's still the same
Be careful...

Answer 1

It is good like really good i like it a lot

Answer 2

i like it<3

Answer 3

Beautiful <3 (: