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4waldo:

Rate my poem "My Pet Tree"

4waldo:

brokenbaexd:

Bravo!!

Rylee88:

Its- not exactly a poem though...

Rylee88:

The last words are supposed to rhyme- and this doesn't make sense to be a poem lool. Mabey like the smallest rap lool.

nobody0123:

@rylee88 wrote:
The last words are supposed to rhyme- and this doesn't make sense to be a poem lool. Mabey like the smallest rap lool.
not all poems rhyme, example is a free-verse poem

Rylee88:

yea, but still doesnt seem as one. it IS MY opinion lool..

brokenbaexd:

frl not all poems rhymes

nobody0123:

i created the poem, i know if it rhymes or not

Rylee88:

Okay? But its my OPINION so sorry :/

brokenbaexd:

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nobody0123:

@brokenbaexd wrote:
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Rylee88:

@nobody0123 wrote:
@brokenbaexd wrote:
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nobody0123:

btw, tree and me rhymes, soo ...

nobody0123:

in the last stanza

Rylee88:

Okay? its my opinion get over it xD

nobody0123:

ok, lets say i think 4+4= 12 that's my opinion, doesn't mean it's correct

Rylee88:

No opinion are right? there OPINIONs...

Rylee88:

Is your brain level at 4?

nobody0123:

@rylee88 wrote:
Is your brain level at 4?
no but your's is

Rylee88:

Opinions are things that CERTAIN people THINK. ^ Yeah thanks for saying my brains working :)

Rylee88:

Opinions are statements that reflect the views or ideas that people have about subjects and topics. For example, your friend says that all ice cream is tasty. This is their opinion, because not everyone may think the same way, nor can it be proven to be true.

nobody0123:

@rylee88 wrote:
Opinions are things that CERTAIN people THINK. ^ Yeah thanks for saying my brains working :)
yeah but is 4+4=8 but i think it -12 doesn't make it true

Rylee88:

... Alright let me say it so even an 8 year old gets it..O PI N I O N S A R E S E L F O P I N I O N S

nobody0123:

you also need facts, the facts are tree and me rhyme so, yeah

Rylee88:

get it now? or do you need me to ELAAAABORATE say it with me eee llll aaaa booorr aaate

Vocaloid:

Locked due to derailing.

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