review of some of my poems

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Astro · Answer

I like it, Very creative. Good job

4waldo · Answer

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4waldo · Answer

*perfect

brianagatica14 · Answer

Is good bruh! awsome! good job :)

Astro · Answer

I was just about to say the spelling error, but other than that it is very good. Keep up the good work.

brianagatica14 · Answer

@astro wrote:

I was just about to say the spelling error, but other than that it is very good. Keep up the good work.

sameee

4waldo · Answer

@astro wrote:

I was just about to say the spelling error, but other than that it is very good. Keep up the good work.

i know somehow it became an error

Astro · Answer

@4waldo wrote:

@astro wrote:

I was just about to say the spelling error, but other than that it is very good. Keep up the good work.

i know somehow it became an error

Good job fixing it.

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brianagatica14 · Answer

So cutee! good! JOB!!

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brianagatica14 · Answer

okayyy u good! could u do more love ones!

4waldo · Answer

ok here's one

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BrokenMoon · Answer

hey nice job! Maybe make them a bit longer but besides that theyre good

4waldo · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

hey nice job! Maybe make them a bit longer but besides that theyre good

they are short poems they aren't suppose to be long

brianagatica14 · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

hey nice job! Maybe make them a bit longer but besides that theyre good

yeah I agree but I mean it still sounds pretty good

4waldo · Answer

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brianagatica14 · Answer

okay that is a good for sure! bruh good job. So u did all these poems by urself then?

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

okay that is a good for sure! bruh good job. So u did all these poems by urself then?

yes

brianagatica14 · Answer

wow bruh u awsome!

4waldo · Answer

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brianagatica14 · Answer

wow their great!

brianagatica14 · Answer

I don't even have a favorite!

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

wow their great!

thx

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

I don't even have a favorite!

thx

4waldo · Answer

i would enjoy your feedback, it helps me improve my poems

brianagatica14 · Answer

yeah well ugh u could dm me if u want.

4waldo · Answer

last poem for now "Care About"

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brianagatica14 · Answer

awww that was my favorite I think.

brianagatica14 · Answer

But yeah I am honest they are good like 100%

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

But yeah I am honest they are good like 100%

tysm

brianagatica14 · Answer

yeah np that's whut friends r for! ;)

4waldo · Answer

final poem, for today

brianagatica14 · Answer

yay! I hope it's the best of the best!

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@4waldo wrote:

fyi, Just made this poem

brianagatica14 · Answer

wow! that was my favorite for sure. Do u mind if I put that poem in my bio? I'll still put that is by u cause u were the one that made it of course.

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

wow! that was my favorite for sure. Do u mind if I put that poem in my bio? I'll still put that is by u cause u were the one that made it of course.

sure

brianagatica14 · Answer

okay tysm!

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

okay tysm!

np

brianagatica14 · Answer

check my bio lol

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

check my bio lol

cool

brianagatica14 · Answer

lol thx again bruh

4waldo · Answer

@brianagatica14 wrote:

lol thx again bruh

np

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