Question

working on some verses, non-specific use

I don't want to go outside
In the fear of someone asking how i am today
Talking bout the weather
How the flowers are nice, i know they wither
Human interaction is wearing
On me but my family always told me to be caring
But if they ask me what's up, i cant be sharing
That information cause it'll pry out
From the back of my mind
Everything happening, its all too loud
Maybe i'll remember to say nothing much just to be kind
Just focus on my music even though i hate how it sound
The attention just makes me want to hide

Answer 1

i liked it<3 it was pretty good..

Answer 2

DAMN i totally feel this. Most days it feels like if I interact with anything but my dog im being emotionally vunerable, and I hate doing that because I feel like people take advantage of me. I really feel the emotion in this poem and think you did a really great job using descriptive words. Nice job!

Answer 3

This is not your average love song
It's just feeling out what should be said
When we’re together, I just feel solved
Like I'm a puzzle and you know how to fix my head
When we’re together
I’m all better
You give me hope when I wish I was dead
It's in what I've said, what I’ve said

Heart heavy
Dreams paced
I’m dreading
one day
You’ll say
we need space
When i'm waiting on you
I wanna talk us through
I’m waiting


Done trading
Done with all the people
Idc about what they saying
I know you got feelings
Cause i got em too
But what i feel
Is only felt for you
I don’t want to fade
Don’t want to be betrayed
We can talk this out and we can talk it through
It’s hard to let you know I’m in love with you