rate my new poem "Goodbye"

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nikenike · Answer

why

nikenike · Answer

@nikenike wrote:

why

4waldo · Answer

srry, let me get it ready

4waldo · Answer

attachment

nikenike · Answer

i give it 20

4waldo · Answer

@nikenike wrote:

i give it 20

thx, I would also enjoy your feedback to know what I should improve

Mage · Answer

feels very professional. nice work! you could make many great works with little practice and a few metaphors. amazing :)

nikenike · Answer

it is good how it is fr fr

4waldo · Answer

@mage wrote:

feels very professional. nice work! you could make many great works with little practice and a few metaphors. amazing :)

thx

4waldo · Answer

just took me about a minute to make it

nikenike · Answer

like i said i like it

4waldo · Answer

@nikenike wrote:

like i said i like it

thx

Astrid1 · Answer

It's quite beautiful, I like how you brought things together. (:

4waldo · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

It's quite beautiful, I like how you brought things together. (:

thx, just something I threw together, a poem doesn't have to take long if you know what you want to make it about

Astrid1 · Answer

Yeah I know, just take what you have and spread it on paper. Poetry isn't hard for me to write.

4waldo · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

Yeah I know, just take what you have and spread it on paper. Poetry isn't hard for me to write.

thts very good, not most people can write poems easily

Laylalyssa · Answer