Question

How is my poem?

I fall with pain
When it becomes too much to take.
I fall when you're sad,
Or your heart starts to break.

I can come when you panic,
I can come when you're mad.
I'll show up out of the blue
When enough is what you've had.

I'm salty and warm,
I fall a lot
Sometimes when you're strong,
I don't come up at all.

I fill your eyes
I fall down your cheek.
Sometimes I mean weak and pain.

Sometimes when you're scared,
I come as a sign
You can feel when I'm coming,
No matter where
I may come along
When you hear your favorite song.
Sometimes I show up
When you've been strong for way too long.

I know you want to fly away.
I know inside you're a mess.
You want this pain to go, away
Tears are words that ur heart can't express.

Answer 1

I like it I will give it a 10/10

Answer 2

itz lit 10/10

Answer 3

thx antman1 and thx andreee

Answer 4

np doe

Answer 5

i think its very good! so 10/10

Answer 6

aww ty boo

Answer 7

i give it a 10/10

Answer 8

ty

Answer 9

The poem is AMAZING girl GOOD JOB

Answer 10

aww thank you so much gurl again lmao

Answer 11

LMAO

Answer 12

If there was an award, possible chance you could win it.

Answer 13

rlly? thx so much

Answer 14

i love it

Answer 15

u do thx bro

Answer 16

bro ill give u my honest opinion, i liked it alot it really good it show emotions to it and it shows how people can feel sometimes. tbh that kinda reminds of someone and how she use to describe me...and how i was always there at times that she wouldnt expect me to be and how i could make her happy and smile evryday...that why kinda reminds me

Answer 17

love it :)

Answer 18

its really good
100/5

Answer 19

10/10

Answer 20

Very well written and very creative, Keep up the great work.

Answer 21

how did u make this

Answer 22

i love this!! 10/10 :DD

Answer 23

this poem is beautiful very touching

Answer 24

I love this poem you really did a great job displaying emotion

Answer 25

Beautiful finna make me cry

Answer 26

It's good tbh

Answer 27

thx all of you means a lot

Answer 28

100000000

Answer 29

SO GOOD I LOVE IT 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

Answer 30

10 out of the 10s

Answer 31

thx

Answer 32

yoo

Answer 33

@juju2021 hii