Rate my newest poem "My Girl"

Starin into your beautiful eyes, knowing
I’m the luckiest guy in the whole wide world,
cause you’re my girl and one day
I want you to be my wife,
even when we die, you will still be my girl

By 4waldo/ Asarath

Question

Rate my newest poem "My Girl"

Starin into your beautiful eyes, knowing
I’m the luckiest guy in the whole wide world,
cause you’re my girl and one day
I want you to be my wife,
even when we die, you will still be my girl

By 4waldo/ Asarath

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

i think it i great, wonderful, i think whoever you show it to will love it!

4waldo · Answer

@froggirlemmy wrote:

i think it i great, wonderful, i think whoever you show it to will love it!

thx

men · Answer

wait this is actually amazing like i feel like it speaks to me your great at poems whoa amazing!~

4waldo · Answer

@men wrote:

wait this is actually amazing like i feel like it speaks to me your great at poems whoa amazing!~

thx

BrokenMoon · Answer

This makes me wanna cry....

4waldo · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

This makes me wanna cry....

why?

EmilyHerron · Answer

Awwweee this is amazingggg

4waldo · Answer

@emilyherron wrote:

Awwweee this is amazingggg

thx

EmilyHerron · Answer

@4waldo wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

Awwweee this is amazingggg

thx

Yw

mrwhskers · Answer

ITS GREAT

4waldo · Answer

@mrwhskers wrote:

ITS GREAT

thx

men · Answer

stunning

4waldo · Answer

@men wrote:

stunning

thx

EmilyHerron · Answer

Oh i was supposed to rate it 😂 i will do a 8

4waldo · Answer

@emilyherron wrote:

Oh i was supposed to rate it 😂 i will do a 8

thx

EmilyHerron · Answer

@4waldo wrote:

@emilyherron wrote:

Oh i was supposed to rate it 😂 i will do a 8

thx

Yw

Joe348 · Answer

Ahem you could use more words that are harder to comprehend but otherwise good job dude

Joe348 · Answer

10/10 cx