rate my new poems

Question

rate my new poems

4waldo · Answer

I know I was a jerk to you my friend,
I can’t stand to watch you in pain
thats why i’m leavin, so I can’t hurt you again,
I see that pain in your eyes as you walk by
I know I caused it, i’m the one that lost it

NeverAlone · Answer

You're poems? MWA. Exquisite.

NeverAlone · Answer

Take this to the dms fools.

Eiwoh2 · Answer

Don't overcrowd the thread if there won't be any proper criticism.

4waldo · Answer

That’s right, I messed up, I don’t know if I can make up
you put your trust in me, then I turned me back and left you stranded,
I know you hate me, but please open your heart,
or you too will be just like me

4waldo · Answer

Isn’t it funny how a few words, can have your head turnin
and how you can loses everybody who thought you were somebody
the truth is life is tough, you can’t turn your back on what is right

Ash06Wolf · Answer

What's happening exactly?

4waldo · Answer

@ash06wolf wrote:

What's happening exactly?

exactly my poems