rate my new poem just made

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4waldo · Answer

You took my heart and broke it, leaving me all alone
not telling you I still care for you
and for that everyday I cry
I cry for you, knowing you won’t come,
still wishing you still cared about me, and not that other guy

Cyber · Answer

Good

Cyber · Answer

8/10

4waldo · Answer

@cyber wrote:

8/10

thx

nikenike · Answer

1000000

Trashy · Answer

10/10 perfecto

men · Answer

9/10

4waldo · Answer

i would enjoy your feedback, and tell me what i can improve

Trashy · Answer

make it less depressing

men · Answer

what format of a poem is that may i ask?

4waldo · Answer

@trashy wrote:

make it less depressing

not very helpful, lots of poems of depressing

Trashy · Answer

Well stand out then

4waldo · Answer

it is a free verse poem, and the poem does stand out

men · Answer

@trashy wrote:

Well stand out then

poems are meant to stand out and be special

4waldo · Answer

all poems are special in their own way

Trashy · Answer

Thewn quit writing ike evry one else it the same crap just in diffrent words

ITDATBOIQUAVO · Answer

Beauty

Trashy · Answer

O'm not, just saying the truth.

Eiwoh2 · Answer

Don't overcrowd the thread with arguments, take it to DMs.

Rylee88 · Answer

Its not yours, its this kids whos telling you to post it.