Question

My poem :/ hope u like it

"I woke up"

I woke up on the side of the ocean, with you beside me, laying on your shoulder,
I woke up to your handsome face, you bring me a smile,
I woke up to your voice, a charming voice that I love to hear every day,
Then one day, I woke up,
you were with her, you said I was the only one,
you lied

Answer 1

DEEEEEEEP. Nice nice, keep doin what you love :]

Answer 2

thas really good

Answer 3

yes

Answer 4

amazing :D

Answer 5

i like it

Answer 6

Awesome : D<3

Answer 7

I totally feel that, being cheated on is no fun, especially when you have given everything for that person, and they betray u, if u need anyone to talk to, my dms are always open. :)

Answer 8

Thanks, moon! :) and everyone for the nice comments!

Answer 9

LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTT OMG you have a BEAUTIFUL talent!! ahhhhhh

Answer 10

this reminds me of my poem "Anymore"

Answer 11

i loveeeeeeee it!!!

Answer 12

its amazing

Answer 13

its very beautiful, and heartfelt, i can feel the deepening anger towards the one who lied to you :)

Answer 14

That's a really good poem