check out my new poem

The first time I laid my eyes on you
I thought I was going to turn blue
I was only ten years old
you made my heart sped up
I almost gave up, then you walked up
and said, hello, not knowing twenty years later
she would be my wife

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check out my new poem

The first time I laid my eyes on you
I thought I was going to turn blue
I was only ten years old
you made my heart sped up
I almost gave up, then you walked up
and said, hello, not knowing twenty years later
she would be my wife

UhhhKhakis · Answer

*applaud*

UhhhKhakis · Answer

Nice, hopefully one day we can see you famous.

4waldo · Answer

@uhhhkhakis wrote:

Nice, hopefully one day we can see you famous.

thx

UhhhKhakis · Answer

@4waldo wrote:

@uhhhkhakis wrote:

Nice, hopefully one day we can see you famous.

thx

Yw bro.

Katrin369 · Answer

Keep it up. You're going a great job!

Sock · Answer

Bravo

Gorillaz1002 · Answer

Nice i like it

Joe348 · Answer

speed up*

4waldo · Answer

@joe348 wrote:

speed up*

yes thank you for that error spotting

men · Answer

love it