Check out my new poem "Die Happy"

Feeling the cool breeze hitting my face
what a beautiful way to die
It was summer in 2021 as
I was lying on the grass
I remembered my past
then I saw a glimpse
of the world above
as I lay dying happy
my spirit floated above

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Check out my new poem "Die Happy"

Feeling the cool breeze hitting my face
what a beautiful way to die
It was summer in 2021 as
I was lying on the grass
I remembered my past
then I saw a glimpse
of the world above
as I lay dying happy
my spirit floated above

Gorillaz1002 · Answer

its a beautiful poem just kinda sad

4waldo · Answer

@gorillaz1002 wrote:

its a beautiful poem just kinda sad

yeah

geegee44 · Answer

i like the poem

AddyM · Answer

coolio

hhanan · Answer

I like it but I feel like ur other poems were better

4waldo · Answer

@hhanan wrote:

I like it but I feel like ur other poems were better

yeah my other poems were butter, weren't they

4waldo · Answer

@4waldo wrote:

@hhanan wrote:

I like it but I feel like ur other poems were better

yeah my other poems were butter, weren't they

yeah i realize the spelling error

itsmehjay · Answer

Coolio

xhikari · Answer

nice <3

FantasticlyArtsy · Answer

mood though

mrwhskers · Answer

i love it!

Lucaskash3r · Answer

Love it!!

Mood · Answer

love itt it's amazing

UhhhKhakis · Answer

It's nice, just sad. That's fine though, Even Edgar Allen Poe was dark in his poems.

NeverAlone · Answer

This is good. Maybe you should try writing a haiku?

4waldo · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

This is good. Maybe you should try writing a haiku?

haiku?

NeverAlone · Answer

A japanese poem. To make a haiku the first stanza must have no more or less than 5 syllables. Second, needs 7, and last needs 5. In total, 17 syllables. They're easy to write.

4waldo · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

A japanese poem. To make a haiku the first stanza must have no more or less than 5 syllables. Second, needs 7, and last needs 5. In total, 17 syllables. They're easy to write.

seems a little confusing

NeverAlone · Answer

If you want me to teach you, dm me.

4waldo · Answer

im good, thx anyway