ok so i made a rap lyric hope its good

'Life aint fair but sometimes i dont care.
Sometimes im not even aware.
I bare guilt in despair.
I dont even have tears to spare.
Thats why i rejoice in prayer.
Thats the thing that keeps me goin' and growin'
And Knowing that I dont make my parents proud.
But some how Im still showing a smile on my face
In That case i cant stay in one place im always on the run and not bein' a good son but sometimes we want the pain to be done and none but still I fight to be right despite the site in the light but tonight i write.' (Part 1 of 3) "Juvenile" By Noah

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ok so i made a rap lyric hope its good

'Life aint fair but sometimes i dont care.
Sometimes im not even aware.
I bare guilt in despair.
I dont even have tears to spare.
Thats why i rejoice in prayer.
Thats the thing that keeps me goin' and growin'
And Knowing that I dont make my parents proud.
But some how Im still showing a smile on my face
In That case i cant stay in one place im always on the run and not bein' a good son but sometimes we want the pain to be done and none but still I fight to be right despite the site in the light but tonight i write.' (Part 1 of 3) "Juvenile" By Noah

Astrid1 · Answer

WHoah, good lyrics, keep going.

CriminalNoah · Answer

ill close this and just post the whole thing