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Ash06Wolf:

Trying to write a song and wanting some help. Can anyone help me out?

Icyhot:

what do you need halp with?

Ash06Wolf:

@icyhot wrote:
what do you need halp with?
I need help figuring out how to make the chorus of the song

Icyhot:

Okay, what's it about?

Ash06Wolf:

Well I was thinking to make it about a symbolized person as a flower

P1n3appl31:

should I let you handle this icyhot?

Icyhot:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:
should I let you handle this icyhot?
If you want to. I'm thinking of some advice I was given when I started writing songs. It wouldn't hurt for extra help though.

Icyhot:

okay, so I was told by a good teacher that writing song lyrics for a chorus could be converted from a poem. So try that first, if that doesn't work, then you should start by writing what the first line is on here, and then I can help you from there. Do you have any examples of the verses yet that you could post?

Ash06Wolf:

Not yet, but I will think of some real quick

Ash06Wolf:

I've only made a poem once

Icyhot:

if you need help, dms me

Ash06Wolf:

I will

P1n3appl31:

I know someone who could help you make a poem

Icyhot:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:
I know someone who could help you make a poem
Is it Holly?

P1n3appl31:

no it's someone else who has been posting and I do know holly but I didn't know she write poetry

P1n3appl31:

And he/shes not here so you could try holly

Icyhot:

@p1n3appl31 wrote:
no it's someone else who has been posting and I do know holly but I didn't know she write poetry
She taught me how to write it. I've never been good at poetry, but she helped me to realize that it doesn't always have to rhyme or make sense to the reader. It only matters if you like it.

P1n3appl31:

thats true

Icyhot:

most of my poems are depressing though

P1n3appl31:

well then it's your way of getting some sadness out of you and you form it into these beautiful words that magically come in the form of a poem. =)

Ash06Wolf:

When I made a poem a month ago I made it about a friend of mine

P1n3appl31:

poems are sometimes naturally feelings of the author turned into words and these words may use imagery, emotions, or even logic of some kind about well pretty much anything.

axie:

im great at song writing! i would love to help you

NineTailedFox:

make it rhyme, people will like it, this your time. you dont know, all that you can do, you will do good if you try to.

TETSXPREME:

Well are you trying to write a poem or a song?

TETSXPREME:

If your trying to write a song i would go with a hook first

TETSXPREME:

but if you're going with a poem I would recommend thinking about what you're trying to write about first like love, nature, etc.

Ash06Wolf:

@tetsxpreme wrote:
Well are you trying to write a poem or a song?
A song

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