Hey...This is my first question...It's a poem. Will you tell me your thoughts on it?

Like a rain in the middle of summer,
Your beauty is indescribable,
The way I feel about you is just the same,
You are like magic,
You enter a room and it's brighter and loving,
But when you leave it's dark and condescending,
I love your heart,
I love your soul,
I love the way you make my heart flutter at the sudden thought of being with you,
You are my forever,
You are my everything,

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Question

Hey...This is my first question...It's a poem. Will you tell me your thoughts on it?

Like a rain in the middle of summer,
Your beauty is indescribable,
The way I feel about you is just the same,
You are like magic,
You enter a room and it's brighter and loving,
But when you leave it's dark and condescending,
I love your heart,
I love your soul,
I love the way you make my heart flutter at the sudden thought of being with you,
You are my forever,
You are my everything,

{-end-}

Astro · Answer

I like it a lot, Great job! :>

VOIDSAVIREX · Answer

@astro wrote:

I like it a lot, Great job! :>

Thank you~ :)

Astro · Answer

@voidsavirex wrote:

@astro wrote:

I like it a lot, Great job! :>

Thank you~ :)

Sure