new poem not depressing

Even though I have everything, she still took one thing from me, I can never get back,
she stole my heart, my love, my everything I ever wanted she took it and she left, with my heart
my everything, she stole from me and made me fall apart, me heart, she stole she left, and she ain’t comin back

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new poem not depressing

Even though I have everything, she still took one thing from me, I can never get back,
she stole my heart, my love, my everything I ever wanted she took it and she left, with my heart
my everything, she stole from me and made me fall apart, me heart, she stole she left, and she ain’t comin back

cpl106 · Answer

not depressing just brings up old mems

Seba14 · Answer

wow Good Job bro!1

Tatii · Answer

Is this one meant for someone too??

4waldo · Answer

@tatii wrote:

Is this one meant for someone too??

yeah

Tatii · Answer

oh ok... I love it tho!! <3

Seba14 · Answer

yeah.

Haileybailey · Answer

fix it up, needs more grammar, needs work

Timmyspu · Answer

Needs a little bit of grammar and fix it up in a few spots but other than that it is really good. Keep going!

Vocaloid · Answer

Locked due to derailing