Question

Can I get some help creating a blues song? Ive got some lyrics down, but I'm still struggling.

I have my heartbreaking
Every time I look at you
Every Night Every Morning
I'm thinking about you all the time
I want to be talking to you
But every time you push me away
And I can feel my heart breaking
Cause you don’t want me anyways

Im pleading oh Im pleading for you to forgive me
But I know that you don’t want me
You don’t want me anymore
I can’t call your name cause my throat is sore
Crying and screaming over someone I adore
Before I say something to you
I wanted to see what you would do if I really left you

Answer 1

If you need help just look it 🆙

Answer 2

Not trying to yell, sorry

Answer 3

It's fine, but thank you. I have looked it up and what I keep reading is a bit confusing. So I was hoping to see if some people would be willing to help me out.

Answer 4

Try to rhyme the first verse with the second verse.

Answer 5

I mean the third

Answer 6

Rhyme the first with the third verse and the second with the fourth verse.

Answer 7

And then keep that rhythm going.

Answer 8

alright i'll try that thank you.

Answer 9

Np.

Answer 10

i think it is perfect the way it is good jod 100A+