My Best friend poem
similar to Tim Mcgraw's My Best Friend

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRJ0lpu6XaU

The first look made me faint, it was the first time I saw your face
and here I am about to leave, to make you be with me,
cause you’re more than my lover, you’re my best friend, my only friend

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My Best friend poem
similar to Tim Mcgraw's My Best Friend

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rRJ0lpu6XaU

The first look made me faint, it was the first time I saw your face
and here I am about to leave, to make you be with me,
cause you’re more than my lover, you’re my best friend, my only friend

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

this is good lol i like it

4waldo · Answer

@xxxnessalulbaddiexxx wrote:

this is good lol i like it

thx

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX · Answer

aye aye np

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

i think you should check your grammar, and your punctuations

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

But nice job

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

oh and also rhyme your first sentence with your third sentence, and your second sentence with your fourth sentence.

4waldo · Answer

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:

oh and also rhyme your first sentence with your third sentence, and your second sentence with your fourth sentence.

all sentences, don't have to rhyme, it is called a free verse poem