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bridgetmadle5:

You're so worried bout everybody else but be kind to yourself. you watch your friends and cry inside you want to be just like them. skinny bodies and little waists. you don't care about yourself you help everybody else but u come last in the race soo be kind to yourself don't put anybody else and u will win first place. ( be kind to yourself). ( whoa load off i made this like a week ago for my sister hope u like

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

wow - that hits hard thats amazing i love the power and emotions it has behind the texts

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

keep going u should write stories maybe even poems this is amazing

NoahSux:

yah

bridgetmadle5:

@xxxnessalulbaddiexxx wrote:
wow - that hits hard thats amazing i love the power and emotions it has behind the texts
thank you i will write a story soon

xxDeppressionxx:

You're so worried bout everybody else but be kind to yourself. you watch your friends and cry inside you want to be just like them. skinny bodies and little waists. you don't care about yourself you help everybody else but u come last in the race soo be kind to yourself don't put anybody else and u will win first place. ( be kind to yourself). ( whoa load off i made this like a week ago for my sister hope u like I think you need to put some punctuation and check you grammar. It seems like you just repeated saying youโ€™re so worried bout everybody else but be kind to yourself.

xxDeppressionxx:

try not to repeat yourself.

xxDeppressionxx:

Keep up the good work!

xxDeppressionxx:

plus it should look better after you correct the mistakes.

NoahSux:

yeah

bridgetmadle5:

@xxdeppressionxx wrote:
You're so worried bout everybody else but be kind to yourself. you watch your friends and cry inside you want to be just like them. skinny bodies and little waists. you don't care about yourself you help everybody else but u come last in the race soo be kind to yourself don't put anybody else and u will win first place. ( be kind to yourself). ( whoa load off i made this like a week ago for my sister hope u like I think you need to put some punctuation and check you grammar. It seems like you just repeated saying youโ€™re so worried bout everybody else but be kind to yourself.
thx for that note

xxDeppressionxx:

your welcome ๐Ÿ™.

djkfahdsofid:

Love itt!!

baddestgirl:

Aww love, it. It has true meaning and stuff very out there, so true from the heart its beautiful!!๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒผ๐ŸŒˆ

Astrid1:

I love it, I find it very truthful and confident. I hope for future terms you keep writing and become an author or a poet.

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