Question

I need help creating the 3rd verse. Can someone help me out here?

I have my heart breaking
Every time I look at you i know its real
Every Night its aching
I'm thinking about how you make me feel
I want to be talking to you
But every time you push me away
And I can feel my heart breaking
Cause you don’t want me anyways

I'm pleading oh Im pleading for you to forgive me
But I know that you don’t want me
You don’t want me anymore
I can’t call your name cause my throat is sore
Crying and screaming over someone I adore
Before I say something to you
I wanted to see what you would do if I really left you

Everything hurts inside of me
It even is a pain to breath
Something that you wouldn't even believe

Answer 1

All you saw was me on my knees
But everything isnt as it seems

Answer 2

idk kinda rusty at doing this

Answer 3

Oh no your fine, but I really like that

Answer 4

ah thanks I love the song btw

Answer 5

Aw thank you, it me a week to come up with it, but its based on real life.

Answer 6

o yus i can relate

Answer 7

Thats the point. If i may ask what do you think the song is about?

Answer 8

well it sounds like dating someone but they are dealing with stuff and they push you away and its just the excuse. xd

Answer 9

Ooo, I didnt think of it that way, it was about heart break. I love your reasoning though.

Answer 10

I like it 0: ify when it comes to rl, u express it to well. (:

Answer 11

Why thank you uwu

Answer 12

Yw cx

Answer 13

i love it bro keep it up e.e

Answer 14

I'm pleading oh Im pleading for you to forgive me
But I know that you don’t want me
You don’t want me anymore
I can’t call your name cause my throat is getting bored
Crying and screaming over someone I lost so fast
Before I say something to you
I wanted to see what you would do if I really left you
Took your heart and put it back together
Even though you made me blue

Everything hurts inside of me
Darkness pain and agony
Something that you wouldn't even believe
That some day ill have you again with me

Im the same old kid that I used to be
So naive, oblivous
people ask me what time it is
Stone face I sit there, wondering what time ill get there

Its hard to feel alone but harder to know your not
Its hard to know that its all your fault
But some how feel its not

So this is my gift to you
My heart
Take it or leave it
The last thing I wanted to do was take yours then bleed it

Answer 15

i think i finished it, hbu

Answer 16

wow

Answer 17

You took my song and turned it into something new, I love it. But I give full credit to you. Keep that song you made and turn it into a passion for yourself cause I think it's amazing.

Answer 18

LMAO its already a passion

Answer 19

i love the songs, and its good with what axie put in it, i say this is officialy amazing~