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YooGirlAriel14:

The darkness surrounds me. It's getting so cold. I'm all alone With no one to hold. My world is so empty. All that's left is pain. No sunshine to light my way, Just never-ending rain. I drown in tears. My heart is crying. No one seems to notice My soul is dying.

wifeyxhubby:

i like it

YooGirlAriel14:

thx boo

wifeyxhubby:

@yoogirlariel14 wrote:
thx boo
always

killerjay556:

if u need anything im here for u and uk that i will be

YooGirlAriel14:

yeah i know boo thanks but i just need time right now but im here for u 2 always

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

i love it lol1

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

thank u for sharing something so amazing e.e

YooGirlAriel14:

aww thx

Bvellla:

Dark

WolfCub:

nicee!

TETSXPREME:

Nice Poem love it

Sailor:

Nice 👍

laylasnii13:

Love it

yarieliz:

i like it, but it sounds so depressing.

MadamMystery:

So depressing...

SaltTheLoser:

Oh cool then her message comes off the way she intended 👍

Sweetie145:

ok it's better than the one i did u did an amazing job and great work hun 🥰😘

IamIsis:

I LOVE it !!!! Did you Write IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

YooGirlAriel14:

thanks all of ya'll

NoahSux:

Ohh nice poem

BiggieCheeseIsHot:

Dark, but great.

YooGirlAriel14:

yh ik and thx

Jane2711:

i love this is kinda describes me a lot

BrokenMoon:

I like it, u did good on grammar, and really set the tone, nice job

YooGirlAriel14:

thx both of ya'll

juju2021:

yoo

dylanjustchillin:

u ok

YooGirlAriel14:

yeah

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