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laylasnii13:

I just made a song not sure what to call it but here u guys go Verse 1- I'm tired of feeling hurt, feeling like I don't belong I thought I had a few people but I'm really alone. I cry when nobody is home… om. tryna figure out how to cope. Sometimes I think I'm falling down and no one wants to catch me.. ee. I wanna cry and drown and scream out loud no ones cares to hear me im tired of people who mean the world to me and lie to me My world is so emptyx2 Verse 2 (rap part )- I can't take the fake people i’m going through depression feeling like crap depending on people who don’t really care for me tryna be nice but u don’t give a damn bout me tryna continue my dad's legacy if he was here i know he would be so proud of me Verse 3 - My auntie understand me she makes me feel happy she never doubted me every time i felt crazy she was always there for me if my dad was here he would tell me to keep my head up high and don’t worry baby my friends and family makes me feel happy sometimes i doubt myself cause i feel i don’t deserve to be happy

UhhhKhakis:

It's nice, keep up the good work!

Madiron:

yeah keep up with the good work and i have an idea what you could name it

laylasnii13:

@madiron wrote:
yeah keep up with the good work and i have an idea what you could name it
what shoul i nme it ??

Madiron:

i have few rn i could give you,"cope" and "coping" and "i'm alone"

NoodlesAndRiceYT:

I love it!! Its amazing, keep up the good work (:

SaltTheLoser:

Name it on my own

Tonycoolkid21:

\(\color{black}{noobking}\)

itsmo:

fire

itsmo:

can yall look at mine?

IamIsis:

I like it it should be called "heartbroken by melancholy"

laylasnii13:

@iamisis wrote:
I like it it should be called "heartbroken by melancholy"
tysm

laylasnii13:

@itsmo wrote:
can yall look at mine?
sure

laylasnii13:

@noodlesandriceyt wrote:
I love it!! Its amazing, keep up the good work (:
tysm

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

omg i love ittt (:

XxXNessalulbaddieXxX:

im sorrry im a little late to the gang but hey this is great

laylasnii13:

it's fine and tysm i guess the more hate i got the more it pushed me to work harder and express how i really feel and i don't care who hates what i say it's not towards them it's towards people u really know me and i'm tired of not being able to express myself but i finally did in this song and i think i did so good

Dabi:

This is amazing! When you put it to a beat, post it on here! I wanna hear it! It's good that you're getting out your feelings in this kind of way instead of doing what I do and lashing out or getting sick. Keep on doing this, it's amazing!

laylasnii13:

@dabi wrote:
This is amazing! When you put it to a beat, post it on here! I wanna hear it! It's good that you're getting out your feelings in this kind of way instead of doing what I do and lashing out or getting sick. Keep on doing this, it's amazing! [/quote tysm

Joe348:

thats was some deep thoughts cx ngl why does everyone feel this way

laylasnii13:

@joe348 wrote:
thats was some deep thoughts cx ngl why does everyone feel this way
because life is life and people go through some real shii out here and nobody cares to even hear or notice their pain so they do this or lash out i choose to write because i know how my temper is.

anivearb0109:

FIRE SEND ME A COPY WHEN YOU SING IT SO I CAN HEAR IT K

laylasnii13:

@anivearb0109 wrote:
FIRE SEND ME A COPY WHEN YOU SING IT SO I CAN HEAR IT K
tysm and i will

anivearb0109:

When well you so it

laylasnii13:

@anivearb0109 wrote:
When well you so it
i'm still looking for a beat so if u have any suggest let me know

Anon100:

im late but like this mad cool

laylasnii13:

tysm

Sailor:

Beautiful <3

laylasnii13:

tysm

Sailor:

@laylasnii13 wrote:
tysm
np uvu

hailey1:

@sailor wrote:
Beautiful <3
I agree with sailor

link1234:

Cool

laylasnii13:

@link1234 wrote:
Cool
tysm

NoahSux:

very nice!

Sonialyn24:

Amazing!!

Jayda123:

girl this ts gooooodddd

yarieliz:

so good love it .

shalore:

amazing i love it

kward64:

its great

Jane2711:

this is so great

hailey1:

Imma put it in my google keep notes that way I can read it all the time.

Vasellasar26:

That is such a good song i love it a lot! Keep up the great work

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