Question

yo can sb help me finish me song?

Answer 1

sure wsppp

Answer 2

i can help e.e

Answer 3

ok so im stuck Pear frick

Answer 4

lets see

Answer 5

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Answer 6

1 sec

Answer 7

is it the pear song

Answer 8

I want you that's all i wanna do all i do is follow you to the ends of the earth ill go but i feel like the stupid guy to beacon to your calls but me yes me thats just all i do di cant evan fathom a thought without you i need you baby were you going now come back here and just sit here next to me

Answer 9

im stuck

Answer 10

first lets fix some spelling errors all right ?

Answer 11

imma do that inna final draft on a doc imma just spell check stuff

Answer 12

ik i cant spell good

Answer 13

nvm ill figuer it out thanks guys

Answer 14

and a song is literally telling a story

Answer 15

thx

Answer 16

now

Answer 17

?

Answer 18

since nessa likes to comment and never help anyone

Answer 19

let me help you

Answer 20

i need like filler words to fix the flow more

Answer 21

"I want you that's all I wanna do all I do is follow you to the ends of the earth. I'll go but I feel like the stupid guy to beacon to your calls but me yes me that's just all I do, I can't even fathom a thought without you I need you baby, where are you going now come back here and just sit here next to me"

you could add,

"lay down with me, dont be scared. let it out all" like make the girl think shes safe idk, add some of your emotion to it

Answer 22

what

Answer 23

ite fs tbh it was a quick write i just need to get like another half a page bc i gotta 3 to finish by this weekend

Answer 24

hold on, is it a story or a song, ? kinda confused lol

Answer 25

its a song bt all my songs are me just telling story from my life

Answer 26

hmm im not sure how that works

Answer 27

how so

Answer 28

how could you like add youre life story and songs into a story-

Answer 29

your*

Answer 30

its like a life experience expresses in music

Answer 31

i agree, emotions

Answer 32

ok look ill send a song of somthing that happened to me ite

Answer 33

ill give you my soul
in exchange in your heart
Anything for your love
i cant think when r apart

Answer 34

that one is good tet

Answer 35

whoospz wrong thinggy

Answer 36

i just said anything tbh i didnt even look at his song he made

Answer 37

mix up youre emotions

Answer 38

yk ?

Answer 39

HeMotions

Answer 40

{Verse 1}
Funny how she calls tonight
I need her more than ever
I've been down in low cotton
As lonesome as can be
And I think about her often, boys
And even when I'm sober
I read over the love notes
The ones she wrote for me

{Pre-Chorus}
And if she want one night
Well that'd be just fine, well

{Chorus}
Somebody fetch my walkin' cane
I'm gonna get my baby
I'm gonna run to meet her
'Neath the shadow of the pinesShe's gonna hop that coal train
She'll get off on Harlan Road
Love me 'til the morning comes
And leave me like a dream

{Verse 2}
And I'd run to her through tobacco fields
And over 'cross the clover
I'd wade a mile of briar patch, boys
Just to touch her skin
And I reckon I'm the foolish kind
To beckon to her callin'
But I can't seem to help myself
Let that woman win{Pre-Chorus}
And if she wants one night
I'm gonna get what's mine, well

{Chorus}
Somebody fetch my walkin' cane
I'm gonna get my baby
I'm gonna run to meet her
'Neath the shadow of the pines
She's gonna hop that coal train
She'll get off on Harlan Road
Love me 'til the morning comes
And leave me like a dream{Bridge}
Buddy, all I know
Is I can't win for losing
Either lay here in this lonely room
Or let her have her way
Buddy, all I need
Is one night where she don't leave
And this one just might be the night
She decides to stay

{Chorus}
Somebody fetch my walkin' cane
I'm gonna get my baby
I'm gonna run to meet her
'Neath the shadow of the pines
She's gonna hop that coal train
She'll get off on Harlan Road
Love me 'til the morning comes
And leave me like a dream
Love me 'til the morning comes

Answer 41

have you sang it ?

Answer 42

i put everthing i have in this and yes i have

Answer 43

sing it ? like send me a link ?

Answer 44

"Walkin' cane" Banana

Answer 45

ion have it posted on anything im in the middle of finishing it like i do the music and my cousin has a studio in chicago so when i can i go up and probuice

Answer 46

ah ok.

Answer 47

im sorry

Answer 48

no worries

Answer 49

ite

Answer 50

i covered a song ill send a link

Answer 51

gud song.

Answer 52

gud song.