i'm making another song or at least i'm trying to,could you let me know if you like it or not

"sometimes i just wish my heart would cease to beat
sometimes i just wish my lungs would cease to breathe

i'm useless,worthless
i'm always screwing things up,left and right
i can never do anything right
i'm useless,worthless
i got these whispers in my ears telling me,
i'm a big loser,i'm a huge mistake,your life is a joke...)

Question

i'm making another song or at least i'm trying to,could you let me know if you like it or not

"sometimes i just wish my heart would cease to beat
sometimes i just wish my lungs would cease to breathe

i'm useless,worthless
i'm always screwing things up,left and right
i can never do anything right
i'm useless,worthless
i got these whispers in my ears telling me,
i'm a big loser,i'm a huge mistake,your life is a joke...)

kaleighh533 · Answer

i find it very opening and interesting, in my opinion it is good so far but i hope to see u try and finish this.

Imarieee · Answer

I find this song very personal and I feel what your saying. I cant wait to see what you come up with. I would love to hear it along with your other songs <333
Good luck luv 
Cant wait to hear the rest

Madiron · Answer

@kaleighh533 wrote:

i find it very opening and interesting, in my opinion it is good so far but i hope to see u try and finish this.

thanks,i will try