I need help on an essay.
What kind of essay?
I'm doing a supply chain and disrupt essay
this is what i have for the introduction. I think I should re word it because its way too repeating. Introduction This will be your introduction. Briefly describe your organization, the shortage and the impact on your organization. This will be 1 – 3 paragraphs. My organization is the Zinc tire industry, where we distribute, sell and manufacture rubber for tires. We currently are in low stock of rubber, because there was a flood that destroyed our stocks. We are currently in a shortage of rubber because some of our rubber trees have died out due to diseases and other reasons. This has impacted us greatly, which we cannot sell and distribute any rubber tires to any place right now. We mainly ship and sell to Thailand, but at the moment we cannot sell to anyone. Recently, our safety stocks have been destroyed based on further events. As of right now, we are currently not able to sell any rubber.
= We are Currently in a shortage due to a flood which had happened recently and our rubber trees have hit hard diseases " Somthing like that would help you have to seprate sentences talking about the same thing
Yes thats why i said I need to shorten it
Sorry about that I am very blind and Slow.
its ok
But yes it does repeat and that needs to be adjusted a little.
ok now I did this: My organization is the Zinc tire industry, where we distribute, sell and manufacture rubber for tires. We ship and distribute our products to Thailand and other countries. Our rubber is 100 percent natural rubber that comes from the rubber wood trees. Recently, our safety stocks have been diminished due to some unreasonable circumstances. We are currently unable to deliver any of our products at this time, because we are low on raw materials to make this product.
i'm thinking i should add more though
You should add more facts.
I am
My organization is the Zinc tire industry, where we distribute, sell and manufacture rubber for tires. We ship and distribute our products to Thailand and other countries. Our rubber is 100 percent natural rubber that comes from the rubber wood trees. Recently, our safety stocks have been diminished due to some unreasonable circumstances. We are unable to deliver any of our products at this time, because we are low on raw materials to make this product. Our stocks have been destroyed recently because of the flood that wiped out all of our materials. Our rubber trees are also getting different diseases. We are having trouble getting any new materials into our hands.
Yes that looks great @scaryperson .
Okay now onto the soultion.
i got something: im still working on it Solutions This section will contain the solutions you considered. The pros and cons of each solution. This will likely require 3 -6 paragraphs. The first solution we had in mind was to get rid of the diseases that are affecting the rubber trees. Some of the pros would be, we can cut off the infected parts of the tree, or we could spray it with something to help it not get that disease.
"Spray it with somrthing"Like...
idk im looking
Pesticides
no because that for animals
i think there is a word for plants
Well do some research and come back to me with what you found
okay.
The first solution we had in mind was to get rid of the diseases that are affecting the rubber trees. Some of the pros would be, we can cut off the infected parts of the tree. Some of the cons would be that the tree might not survive the entire process if we continue to cut off parts of the tree. The next one was that we could spray it with something to help it not get that disease. We could put some fungi on it, to eat away at the disease. The cons of this is that if there is too much fungi on the plant, it could also eat away at the parts we need, thus resulting in the plant dying.
ima add more little facts in it
your doing good so far just add some more little facts about the disease, okay? other than that its perfect.
The first solution we had in mind was to get rid of the diseases that are affecting the rubber trees. Now this wouldn’t be easy, because there would be some obstacles in our way. We had to think of a way to stop the spread of the disease. Our team had some ideas on what we should do, and we all choose a list of some that would be helpful. There are pros which are the advantages and there are cons which are the disadvantages. Here is the list of the ideas we considered. Some of the pros would be, we can cut off the infected parts of the tree. Some of the cons would be that the tree might not survive the entire process if we continue to cut off parts of the tree. The next one was that we could spray it with something to help it not get that disease. We could put some fungi on it, to eat away at the disease. The cons of this is that if there is too much fungi on the plant, it could also eat away at the parts we need, thus resulting in the plant dying.
Yeah your doing great at it
is your probelm solved?
no brb
ok back
Awesome good job
next thing The first solution we had in mind was to get rid of the diseases that are affecting the rubber trees. Now this wouldn’t be easy, because there would be some obstacles in our way. We had to think of a way to stop the spread of the disease. Our team had some ideas on what we should do, and we all choose a list of some that would be helpful. There are pros which are the advantages and there are cons which are the disadvantages. Here is the list of the ideas we considered. Some of the pros would be, we can cut off the infected parts of the tree. Some of the cons would be that the tree might not survive the entire process if we continue to cut off parts of the tree. The next one was that we could spray it with something to help it not get that disease. We could put some fungi on it, to eat away at the disease. The cons of this is that if there is too much fungi on the plant, it could also eat away at the parts we need, thus resulting in the plant dying.
and then the next section would be Results This is where you will explain in more detail why you selected the proposed solution. A good hint for this is explain how you developed the weights for the critical variables (elements) in your optimization matrix. For example, “The time between harvesting and processing is a key consideration in overall finished quality. Therefore, time in transit is critical in selecting a solution.” 1-3 paragraphs
Good
idk about this one
i gotta do this one now Results This is where you will explain in more detail why you selected the proposed solution. A good hint for this is explain how you developed the weights for the critical variables (elements) in your optimization matrix. For example, “The time between harvesting and processing is a key consideration in overall finished quality. Therefore, time in transit is critical in selecting a solution.” 1-3 paragraphs
im not too sure about this one
I could help you, hold up for a minute ill give you a couple essay posts
ok
https://questioncove.com/users/spectrum#/updates/60a52a122514900e1083b200 This one is mine
okay
Ok so what im confused on is what does explain how you developed the weights for the critical variable
okay
Hold on
bruh how long you going to take mg
sorry im trying to re read it to see if it mskes sense sorry
Just........................write the essay.
Its been an hour, could've already had the rough draft done
im almost done
im just confused on this one part.
Here is what I am going to suggest one write it first them have somone look over it. Also put it through grammerly to have it checked there. Then check it with other person.
like this makes no sense. This is where you will explain in more detail why you selected the proposed solution. A good hint for this is explain how you developed the weights for the critical variables (elements) in your optimization matrix. For example, “The time between harvesting and processing is a key consideration in overall finished quality. Therefore, time in transit is critical in selecting a solution.” 1-3 paragraphs
this one stpid section i dont understand
What don't you understand about it
read it
this one stupid section i don't understand
@dude @vocaloid can you help this user
no they cannot.
@samixboo
Don't bother them
@tetsxpreme
im in class rn. i can't do it rn anyway
i am helping shh
bruh can u not read. I am in class. I am taking notes. I CANT WRTE THE ESSAY RN
ima close this an open nother one later
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