Question

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Answer 1

So my life is grand
Beautiful and bright
There's never anything wrong
With life it's happy and silly

Until one fateful day I woke
Next to you,at first I was
Confused, shocked and many more
I never even knew who you were

I woke up that fateful morning
With a smile on my face
Got ready for work until I felt
A pull so strong it made me weak
My legs turned to stone
My brain so numb
My body just said Noooo

I fell into the bed
Looking at the ceiling
Next you (little drum boom)
So I lay with a smile on
My face wondering what’s
To happen next on this bright day

That’s when I could here small
Little whispers creeping in
Slowly doing me in
It all started to fade to black
Dark thoughts started to make me lack
To much that I can’t unpack
Things life throws at me just crack
But It all started just to stack

When forced out of bed
The dark creeps close behind
I walk outside to find
My car I parked gone outside
And a little note on door
Saying it's been towed
I just getting the feeling of going
Back to bed so I do just that

Answer 2

Is anyone reading this am sorry if I made it to long

Answer 3

this is rlly cool tbh

Answer 4

i like it! Nice job!

Answer 5

thank you