Question

Astrid is back wit another poem 🤧

Giving away my pain for you to store.
But I keep getting more.
Tell me, did you even love me?
Was it just another fantasy?
I'm not what I want to be.
It's all because of you baby.

I'm givin up, giving up on you.
Can't tell if you wanted me to.

Was it worth it in the end
When you made my heart bend.
Was it really true, or were you a fake like every dude?

You can't see.
Clearly, you're too blind baby.
Would you like to see me dead?
As I'm laying down in an empty bed.

Where did you go?
Are you lying to me thinking I won't know?
Sorry but, I'll always know.

You ain gotta pretend no more.
What's this life even for?
Useless to me.
Can't you see?

Giving away my pain for you to store.
But I keep getting more.
Tell me, did you even love me?
Was it just another fantasy?
I'm not what I want to be.
It's all because of you baby.

I just want love baby..

Answer 1

That's deep and really good at the same time :0

Answer 2

Thanks 0;

Not sure if I should turn it into a song 😅 Thinking about it, since it kinda sounds like one.

Answer 3

lol

Answer 4

Sounds like it's about me.

Answer 5

Nahh it's not

Answer 6

Love it tho! 💞💞💞💞

Answer 7

wow, i dont know if i can hold back the tears. like i totally understand this.

Answer 8

understandable, keep your head up though. it gets better, just give it time

Answer 9

I sure hope so.

Nobody can tell the future, only lay it out.

Answer 10

its good but is it abt somebody? astrid

Answer 11

dang that's dEeP I love it hehe

Answer 12

That is very deep. That was really good astrid.

Answer 13

Thank you pasta.
Thank you tim can.
And okay Zari (whos name is close to my dogs 👀)

Answer 14

Fr tho, my dog's name is Zahari, and we call her Zari/Hari for short

Answer 15

cool

Answer 16

Ayeeeeeeee Beautiful
<3

Answer 17

woah

Answer 18

Thanks Xio <3

Lazer, not made one yet x.x

Adrikw- Woah????

Answer 19

BIG FAT O: GG ASTRIDO!

Answer 20

Thanks x.x

Answer 21

:o ur really gud at writing poems, good job

Answer 22

Ty <3

Answer 23

very cool poem there it’s deep to be honest i can relate in someway keep at it Shakespeare😂

Answer 24

cxxxx thanks <3

Answer 25

Ofc yw

Answer 26

I love your writing Astrid

Answer 27

Thank chu

Answer 28

that is really good,great job

Answer 29

Astrid its beautiful I luv ittt

Answer 30

gurlll yeyeye this is amazing