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Icyhot:

Here is a poem I wrote. What do you guys think about it? I need help with a name for it... I have no reasons None except mentality My heart is broken for you Yet you don't even care After losing you Nothing is the same I don't get hungry I just eat to cope You're the reason for my changes You're the reason I lost 23 pounds at lightening speed You're the reason I can't deal with anything anymore Yet you just sit here and laugh? You do nothing for me Nothing but break my heart Is this a game to you? Am I a game to you? Is it fun to build me up, just to break me back down? I don't think I can handle this anymore I Handle you anymore But it's hard I love you I love you more than I love myself I'd do anything for you I promise Just please...Come back? I'm begging you I swear I won't be annoying I swear on my heart My heart that you've broken oh-so many times already But why? I have no reasons

Icyhot:

Warning: No rhyming

Sailor:

Nice poem

Icyhot:

Thank you

Sailor:

@icyhot wrote:
Thank you
Np

v6mpiresk8ter:

why are all the poems people write depressing, but good poem

Icyhot:

@v6mpiresk8ter wrote:
why are all the poems people write depressing, but good poem
I think it's because most people write poems about emotions and how they feel. It's a good question though

Munchkin4Life:

I find it very good Great job @Icyhot :)

Astrid1:

Yeah, most poets write about what they go through or what they've gone through. It's just a way to rid emotions. Also Me likeyy

Icyhot:

@munchkin4life wrote:
I find it very good Great job @Icyhot :)
Thank you so much

Icyhot:

@astrid1 wrote:
Yeah, most poets write about what they go through or what they've gone through. It's just a way to rid emotions. Also Me likeyy
Thank you, and You're right about that. Poets tend to write about how they feel

Shuki:

I can relate though, you did good on the poem

Astrid1:

@icyhot wrote:
@astrid1 wrote:
Yeah, most poets write about what they go through or what they've gone through. It's just a way to rid emotions. Also Me likeyy
Thank you, and You're right about that. Poets tend to write about how they feel
Yep, and you're welcome

Zo:

I think this poem is very yeah

Icyhot:

@zo wrote:
I think this poem is very yeah
Thank you

Icyhot:

@shuki wrote:
I can relate though, you did good on the poem
It's easier to get along with others when you have something to relate to, so UwU

Icyhot:

I'ma close the post now

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