My first poem:|
I feel the wind brush against my skin,
As I feel the darkness inside devour me,
the happiness Floats away as easy as a feather...
I try to hide it...
I try to be a sunshine
But I always turn into rain...

Made By hunter poem name depression

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My first poem:|
I feel the wind brush against my skin,
As I feel the darkness inside devour me,
the happiness Floats away as easy as a feather...
I try to hide it...
I try to be a sunshine
But I always turn into rain...

Made By hunter poem name depression

Icyhot · Answer

This is deep in a good sense. It's a very good poem and you could easily turn it into the begining of a story. Amazing job! :)

vibezz · Answer

@icyhot wrote:

This is deep in a good sense. It's a very good poem and you could easily turn it into the begining of a story. Amazing job! :)

thanks man :)

NeverAlone · Answer

Interesting. It's a nice poem.

vibezz · Answer

@neveralone wrote:

Interesting. It's a nice poem.

thanks dude

kward64 · Answer

its good

itsmehjay · Answer

Nice I like it

123455 · Answer

This is really good! Good jod

Astrid1 · Answer

Astridy likes it 👀

ILOVESPAGHETTI · Answer

I like it, it's a simple but beautifully worded poem. Continue writing and you'll be the best poet someday!

LazerHubs · Answer

I like it<3. keep making more poems !!

BrokenMoon · Answer

@xxdeppressionxx look this poem named after u o_0