i made another:

Hearing people yell at me

that ill never make it in life

gives me the shivers that run down my spine

it hurts me so much to feel all this pain

rage forms day after day

I constantly get this urge of ending the pain

made by hunter: Poem name PAIN

Question

i made another:

Hearing people yell at me

that ill never make it in life

gives me the shivers that run down my spine

it hurts me so much to feel all this pain

rage forms day after day

I constantly get this urge of ending the pain

made by hunter: Poem name PAIN

TwilightQueenBee · Answer

Wow

TwilightQueenBee · Answer

It's soo true. I can feel it right here in my meow meow.

TwilightQueenBee · Answer

Keep writing dude. This is awesome!!!!!

vibezz · Answer

@twilightqueenbee wrote:

It's soo true. I can feel it right here in my meow meow.

LMAO and thanks

PrestonTX · Answer

im not depressed but its still good

vibezz · Answer

@prestontx wrote:

im not depressed but its still good

:)

itsmehjay · Answer

Oh dang... kinda deep but good job

vibezz · Answer

@itsmehjay wrote:

Oh dang... kinda deep but good job

yeaaa...

shujihanma · Answer

i relate.......good job keep up the good work

hiitsmehannah · Answer

i love your poem its amazing