Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.

1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a community garden. 2. We were walking home from school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4. I thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

What is needed at the beginning of sentence 5?

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Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.

1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a community garden. 2. We were walking home from school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4. I thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

What is needed at the beginning of sentence 5?

Astro · Answer

Welcome to Questioncove. What do you think could be added to make the paragraph flow better?

Astro · Answer

@vocaloid

Astro · Answer

@astro wrote:

@vocaloid

Sorry just want some of the off topic comments deleted.

Vocaloid · Answer

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