Question

This is called "Imagine" I titled this after the song Imagine by John Lennon.
I know there need to be some improvements but I'm still working on it I think I got it to where it's good though.
Imagine a world
A world with love
No problems like a dove
(Livening like a dove)
Imagine a world were we can fly
Fly fly away with no lie

oh oh oooh

The hate the love the sadness to
Oh Maybe im in love with you

Oh oh ohh
Oh oh oh

I amm trying so hard
Im Trying too live
Live a life with happiness

Oh oh oh

The hate the love the sadness to oh oh
Maybe im in love with you

But I mess up
I fall way down
I was lost but now im found
I am glad your here
To help me up oh
So I guess ill let you steer

Character is how the story goes
But Im different yea everybody knows
I twist i turn
I run around
But I still find myself hitting the ground

Oh oh oh ooh oh oh

The hate the love the sadness to
Oh Maybe im in love with you

Ohh ohh

Im sorry
Im sorry I can’t go on
Im sorry that I couldn’t give you my all
I want to live a life with happiness
Oh oh ooh baby I might just fall into the abyss

We break we fall we have to
Find a way were we can be two

Oooooh oooooooh
Aaaah

Imagine a world where wee can live
Live in peace no secrets
A place where we just might fit

Imagine a world
A world with love
No problems like a dove
Imagine a world were we can fly
Fly fly away with no lie oh oh oooh
Oooh oh ooh oh oh

The hate the love the sadness to
Oh Maybe im in love with you

Oh oh oh
Oh Maybe im in love with yoooouuu

Answer 1

IM FIRST TO RESPONDDDD

Answer 2

HIII

Answer 3

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Answer 4

I love the original of this song, this is also really good. Keep p the great work!