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Sock:

help?

Sock:

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TogaHimiko:

o.o

Sock:

i know, I have the topics I just need helping writing it

Sock:

excuse my grammar

TogaHimiko:

hmm well wht do you have so far? topic wise

Sock:

Ok so one of the things I thought I could write about is how jellyfish blooms disrupt fishing industries by tearing nets and harming fish. I have the write the paragraph on jellyfish so yeah

TogaHimiko:

well i mean...i can give you a head start on ur essay if u would like?

TogaHimiko:

lol i said essay i mean paragraph

Sock:

what exactly does that mean, im sorry I'm dumb

TogaHimiko:

well it means i can help you like walk u threw on wht u need to do

Sock:

ohh that would be nice if you'd be willing to do that

Sock:

I'm not the best at writing

TogaHimiko:

ok so..whts the first topic

Sock:

Ok so I just have to write about jelly fish so I figured I could talk about how they negatively affect humans for the first paragraph

TogaHimiko:

ok soo give me the reasons on y they "negatively affect humans" (srry for the bad grammar)

TogaHimiko:

well 3 reasons to be specific

Sock:

Ok so they have damaged power plants and fisheries, they consume a large amount of fish and prevent the recovery of overfished populations

TogaHimiko:

ok thats good for a start

TogaHimiko:

so ig we could use the first reason which is " they have damaged power plants and fisheries"....

TogaHimiko:

now give two details on y " they have damaged power plants and fisheries"

Sock:

ok

Sock:

Jellyfish blooms disrupt the fishing industry by tearing there nets and harming the fish

Sock:

And other smaller jellyfish or jellyfish tentacles can enter the fish's pens and suffocate them

TogaHimiko:

ok so thats good for a start and atp you have ur first paragraph

Sock:

ok :)

TogaHimiko:

lol also a tip for when u need to do stuff in the future such as essays and stuff ..try to think of 3 reasons and 3 details for the reasons

TogaHimiko:

and if you can do that then u pretty much have it all mapped out

Sock:

ok, so I finished, sorry if it's not the best "Jellyfish can both affect humans negatively and positively. One of the ways they affect humans negatively is because they can disrupt the fishing industry. The jellyfish blooms disrupt the fishing industry by harming fish and tearing their nets. Also smaller jellyfish or jellyfish tentacles can enter the fish's pens and suffocate them. They can be very destructive and cause a lot of damage."

Sock:

sorry i took a long time my internet went out

Sock:

@TogaHimiko

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