Question

i need some opinions for my exposition for my narrative . it is based off the song mansion by NF




My mind is like a home that I am trapped in. rooms covered in sadness and fear. All of my feelings written all over the walls and floors like lyrics. I stare into this shattered mirror to see a light skinned boy with dark hair. Eyes so blue that you could drown in their sadness. 21 years of life trapped into a scared little body. My mother named me after my uncle that died the same way she did. Nathan died from his drug addiction. Anglia, my mother died from a drug addiction. I, Nathan Foyerstine will die from god knows what, but it will not be from a drug addiction. I refuse to become the same feen my family was no matter how much pain I will endure from this filthy life.

Answer 1

Very good, NF is very good to base things off of because he has a lot of things that people have done or experienced in there life.

Answer 2

I like it, you spelled his last name wrong tho. I used to be super into NF, but recently hes been adding way to much gospel into his music

Answer 3

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Answer 4

it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

Answer 5

this is great

Answer 6

yay tank u