Question

I just thought of a little song idea I know it is a little weird but here are the lyrics.

People say pain is easy
They say it comes as will
But when the time comes it's hard to stay still
I move and jitter
I shake and shiver
I never do it but the thought makes me quiver
I am insane
I got these thoughts in my brain
Everbody that knew me thought I was going to fail but imma stay the same


You might say it's easy but it's not
Even though your broke doesn't mean you have to rot
Stay healthy stay strong and you'll live
Life is a pleasure not something you should un-give
You feed into your head
You sleep and lay in your. Bed
But you’ll never get to that place
Place of rest
Place Of glory with a chest
Full of luxury im still blurry
I want to be with you
No im not true but I still need you

Take a moment to stand and listen
The silence breaks through the air and glistens
Life is not rare but something of your grasp
Hold onto it and don't let it fall fast
Build yourself up and up and give everything till your last breath
Trust me you will make
Trust me you will shake it
Shake the earth of its feet
Show me a real reason
She me I am not bleeding

People say pain is easy
They say it comes as will
But when the time comes it's hard to stay still
I move and jitter
I shake and shiver
I never do it but the thought makes me quiver
I am insane
I got these thoughts in my brain
Everybody that knew me thought I was going to fail but imma stay the same
Imma stay the same

Answer 1

Is this a poem? It has lines and is looks like it's supposed to rhyme.

Answer 2

i have a more meledoic and ryhme schemes in my songs

Answer 3

They are not the same the difference between them is that a song is set to music while a poem is not set to music. A poem is a composition that is written or spoken for communicating beautiful, imaginative, or elevated thoughts. But a song is written or adapted for the purpose of singing. Therefore, they are different and not the same.

Answer 4

Look i said these are the lyrics i just wrote unless you are going to say I like it or I don't like it please don't say nothing because I do not need your teaching about poems and song. I have multiple songs out that have over 67k listens and some that have more. AGAIN I SAID THESE ARE THE LYRICS how about you READ.

Answer 5

it is great

Answer 6

i liked it alot

Answer 7

Wow, Getting defensive because it's a poem? Well good luck on making "Music"

Answer 8

So you didn't even make it, and you said you did?

Answer 9

I do make music are you ok i am concerned about you

Answer 10

Well, you just said "They even knew they was wrong cuz I said it was just lyrics to a song." It was lyrics to a song, So you stole them from another song?

Answer 11

Yeah, it is weird bro

Answer 12

I just wrote it so yes it is a song. You are assuming which is never a good idea. I said it was just lyrics to a song. So if you are old enough to understand it refers to me making a song which you can obviously see if you used context clues from past comments and my heading of this.

Answer 13

You just assumed if I was okay or not, AND It's a poem sorry buddy. If you used your eyes you would see it's a P O E M, Not a song. If it really is, Then you are not that good at it...

Answer 14

Lemme get this straight...... You stole lyrics???

Answer 15

Well, It's not good then. Sorry buddy.

Answer 16

Ok sir you got lyrics from a song?

Answer 17

No Problem! Do you make songs for JordynTheAlien? You'd both be GREAT, Shes a bad singer and your a bad writer =)

Answer 18

You can