Question

I just revised some lyrics to a song that I wrote a few days ago. Tell me if you like it or not.

OH I…. Am
Going to die soon
I know its coming its true youuu you
You are the one I need in my life
I know im not right but I can’t see the future in your eyes

Pop a perky to my head now screaming
I can see the future in your eyes now im screening
I can keep it real with you baby im not fleeing
I am gonna die soon I am bleeding
Bleeding out my eyes
I can’t see nothin you stabbed me twice
Ooooh oooh oh oh oh ohhh


Yea I
Am going to
Die
Im going to go up above
Im gonna see my family
I will be home soon
Soon enough to let you come home
Come home to mee
I want to live my life free
I can’t give up no more
I will be okay now I am going to say
I love you
You are the one I see but u break meee
I want you to know that I am dying
You can see

OH I…. Am
Going to die soon
I know its coming its true youuu you
You are the one I need
In my life you’ll see
I know im not right but I can’t see the future in your eyes

Pop a perky to my head now screaming
I can see the future in your eyes now im screening
I can keep it real with you baby im not fleeing
I am gonna die soon I am bleeding
Bleeding out my eyes
Its my heart that you stabbed twice
I can’t see nothin its like im swatting flies
Swarming my head
Corruption
Destruction
Of me in you
Well will be free to
Im in love with you
Ooooh oooh oh oh oh ohhh

Answer 1

it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

Answer 2

Thanks this is one im publishing next weekend

Answer 3

o good its good you sholde make it ofisel

Answer 4

official
i mean

Answer 5

im not good at spelling

Answer 6

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