Question

I finished writing this song yesterday and I was wondering how it was. Life: .


The night and day
When we met
Maybe it was the same
Bt I wasn’t sure no-o
We were real friends for a day
But now this is real

I liked you since that day
We met in the sunset
That day I praise until the day I die
This doesn’t feel like home
But it feels like life

Like a stray dog in the street
We are one of a kind
I didn’t see until I realized it was time
Felt like a rush in my veins as I’m writing this song
Didn’t feel at home oh for so long

I liked you since that day we met in the sunset
That day I praise until the day I die
This doesn’t feel like home
But it feels like life

Looking at you I feel overwhelmed
I think and I think “is this enough” and “does she feel the same”
We’re like one, simpatico
Until that day same

I liked you since that day (since that day) we met in the sunset
That day (that day) I praise until the day I die
This doesn’t feel like home
But it feels like life

Answer 1

Wale the sage type beat

Answer 2

um thats really good

Answer 3

I like it

Answer 4

That is so good! No complaints. The lyrics smooth out really well.

Answer 5

very gooood bsf

Answer 6

Wow. This is beautiful. Now I want to hear you sing it. 😏

Answer 7

Thanks guys :)